Wednesday 31 August 2016

Lim Hong Wei Poem Recitation: The Visitor

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B_FL7k6H5E3iRnJSbVRISzJCYjQ

4 comments:

  1. Pronunciation and articulation: Band 3) Still some occasional problems, but generally good
    Rhythm, pace and fluency: Band 3) Reading was fluent, and there was a pace. However, the pace was quite slow.
    Pitch and tone: Band 3) Pitch was great, with increase of volume to add dramatic effect. However, at some parts, the tone was wrong, especially at that part where the husband called the wife to throw the ring away. It should sound scary and threatening but it sounded happy somehow.
    Pause: Band 4) Pauses were used wisely, however I feel that there are too many pauses.
    Power: Band 4) Great job! Just take note of how you use it.

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  2. Pronunciation and articulation: Band 3) Problems here and there.
    Rhythm, pace and fluency: Band 3) A bit slow.
    Pitch and tone: Band 3) I can see the contrast between the different characters.
    Pause: Band 3) Use pauses at the appropriate area.
    Power: Band 4) I can feel the power.

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  3. Pronunciation and articulation: Band 3) Problems here and there.
    Rhythm, pace and fluency: Band 3) A bit slow.
    Pitch and tone: Band 3) I can see the contrast between the different characters.
    Pause: Band 3) Use pauses at the appropriate area.
    Power: Band 4) I can feel the power.

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  4. Pronunciation and articulation: Band 3) Problems in articulation, but does not affect the understanding of poem.
    Rhythm, pace and fluency: Band 3) The pace was a little slow, but the rhythm and fluency was good.
    Pitch and tone: Band 3) Contrast between the happy moments and scary times can be seen clearly.
    Pause: Band 3) Too many pauses (after each line)
    Power: Band 4) Powerful recitation

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