Clear pronunciation and articulation as well as increase/decrease in volume at suitable areas. Pace could be faster and there could be more dramatic tones at areas such as "A child's ghost screams as her chair's pushed back"
Generally clear pronunciation and articulation. Though some parts were monotone, it was mainly fluent reading. Pitch and tone was appropriate however pauses weren't that clear to me. Vocal power sustained through to end most of the phrases
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Generally clear pronunciation. There can more emphasis and change in tone at some parts