Calvin, your poem recitation of "The Visitor" was good and I liked the pause you did at the end. But during the two sentences "Throw the ring through the window! Throw it away!" , you did not exaggerate the sentence "Throw it away!" more than the sentence " Throw the ring through the window!"
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Good articulation and good variation in tone throughout the entire poem.
Rhythm and pace was good as well as pauses and power gave the correct atmosphere. Pronunciation a bit unclear but generally well done.