Saturday, 30 April 2016

Draft 2 Situational Writing

6 Sim Lim Park
Singapore 234234

3 April 2016

Dear John

I am delighted that you, Aunt Maggie and Uncle Desmond are making a trip to Singapore in a week's time.Please convey my greetings to Aunt Maggie and Uncle Desmond as well.I am happy that you are staying for two days in Singapore, but I wish you could stay more days. Nevertheless, let's enjoy ourselves as much as we can for that two days you are here!

As of the first day, you can have a good breakfast at your hotel.I will meet you at your hotel at 10 a.m after you had your breakfast. Then, we could take a bus to Chinatown where you could see the traditional Chinese culture.You can buy some souvenirs at the street market as well and also take a trishaw ride around the vicinity.For lunch, you can try the Chinese traditional cuisines also.

In the evening, we can go to Singapore Flyer. We can dine in while taking panoramic views of Singapore's iconic bookmarks- Marina Bay, Merlion Park, and Empress Place.Then, you can go back to your hotel to have a good rest.

For the next day, you can have your breakfast at you hotel as well.I will meet you at the hotel at 10 am after you had your breakfast. Then, we could take a bus to Little India. There you could learn the traditions and cultures of the Indians.Also, pick up some last-minute souvenirs at the 24-hour shopping centre- Mustafa Centre. We can try out the Indian cuisines for lunch especially Little India’s special-fish head curry.

We can be in Little India until evening.For dinner, we can go to the local fare”Food Glorious Food!” You can try all the local delights of Singapore like Laksa; Mee Siam; Rojak; Hainanese Chicken Rice; Chilli Crab; Oyster Omelette; Satay; Nasi Lemak and much more.

In the night, yo can head back to your hotel room than the airport. Well, I hope the itenery sounds good to you John. I‘m looking forward to seeing you, Aunt Maggie and Uncle Desmond.

Your loving cousin,
Ming Li

1 comment:

  1. Very well written but you might also consider to add more of the persuasive technique.