Saturday, 30 April 2016

Goh Cheng Yang informal persuasive letter draft 2

6 Sim Lim Park
Singapore 126126

7 April 2016

Dear Cousin

I am really delighted to hear that you and your parents are interested in visiting Singapore! I really hope that you will come to Singapore. Anyway, let me introduce to you some attractions of Singapore that are worth visiting!

I know that your family is interested to learn about the cultural aspect of Singapore, so I plan to bring you to Chinatown. There, you can enjoy some local dishes, like Laksa, Chilli Crab and Nasi Lemak. I can also take you on a walk around Chinatown, so you can bond with your parents, and learn about the culture and history of Singapore. You will like that, won't you?

After that, I can bring you to Little India, another culture-filled attraction of Singapore, which is not far from Chinatown. I will bring all of you around Little India, where you can shop around and explore. You can find unique jewellery and experience walking past stores filled with the aroma of spices! It is a once-in-a-lifetime experience! Feel free to buy some uniquely Singaporean spices home!

Then, in the evening, we can go to the Singapore Flyer, to take in the beautiful panoramic view of the bustling city. The beautiful lighting of the city at night will definitely be a feast for your eyes! I can guarantee that you will awe in disbelief! After the relaxing view, we can proceed to Gardens by the Bay, where the nature awaits. Gardens by the Bay is the perfect mix between nature and the modern world. I'm sure you will love and remember your visit there! There, we can end the day at Satay by the Bay, where we can savour the unique local dish, Satay. In case Satay is not enough for dinner, we can order a vast variety of other delicious dishes! These two modern attractions will definitely be most suitable for you!

Well, I hope that now you really, really want to come to Singapore. After all, you can learn about the culture and modern aspects of Singapore! So please just click the "book hotel" button on your computer screen and rush down to Singapore! I'm really looking forward to seeing you!

Bye for now,
Cheng Yang

1 comment:

  1. "Dear Cousin" shld be "Dear [insert name]"

    "After that, I can bring you to Little India" shld be "After that, I WILL bring you to Little India"

    "I will bring all of you" remove "all of"

    2nd last paragraph has weird and awkward transition to last paragraph

    Lots of details and happy expressions Well Done!!:)